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forgot to give feedback hehe the backstories are kinda lacking for me but overall it was a good read ! can't wait for your other projects
i just finished the story and i think the writing is nice but it felt rushed at the end. the interactive part is interesting though
just downloaded the game! its a simple story but very gripping
tacky layout but good writing. would be better if you added more to it like more choices, rooms and the ability to change the character's name and appearance
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forgot to give feedback hehe the backstories are kinda lacking for me but overall it was a good read ! can't wait for your other projects
i just finished the story and i think the writing is nice but it felt rushed at the end. the interactive part is interesting though
just downloaded the game! its a simple story but very gripping
tacky layout but good writing. would be better if you added more to it like more choices, rooms and the ability to change the character's name and appearance